Wow. What a cool poem. Jordan.
I did enjoy reading them :) What clever students you are to create your own rhyming poems from an old favourite!!! It's such a good idea - I might have to steal it for our junior students at Hauturu one day - I hope that's OK. Being published writers on YouTube is great because now anyone anywhere in the world can read your writing. You have a global audience - well done from Mrs C :)
I really did enjoy reading your poems! What clever authors you are to create your own rhyming poems from an old favourite. Well done for sharing your work on YouTube - you have a global audience - amazing!!! This is such a good idea I might have to borrow it for our little people at Hauturu :) Keep up the creative writing. From Mrs. C
I had such great fun reading these poems - well done. I wonder what you would all write about my big, rattling, smokey, dirty, grey car?